• Members 893 posts
    June 28, 2024, 8:20 a.m.

    LA GRANDE BELLEZZA - ON CLONING/HEALING vs IN SITU COMPOSITION

    This is an interesting trick and well done, so I thank you for showing it to me.

    But it is something that I would never do (and this is not a value judgement, but just my POV).

    At heart I am still a documentary photographer, so moving a subject around in the frame is basically a no-go for me.
    I also hardly ever clone/heal anything. I would certainly not extend the frame (although I do crop) or use AI to fill in missing parts of an image.

    I want my images (in principle) adhere to the rules for photojournalism: no manipulation.
    This does not mean : no post-processing.
    But in general I limit myself to what could be done in the traditional dark room: cropping, straightening, and such.
    I enhance brightness, contrast, saturation and all that just like the next guy.
    So basically I will manipulate the LOOK of an image but not the CONTENT.
    Distortion correction is borderline. It depends on the objectives.

    BTW this does not mean that I am holier than the pope.
    There have been instances where I have cloned out that one candy wrapper from an otherwise pristine beach.
    But I then soothe myself with the thought that I could've also removed the wrapper in real life.
    And I only do it in images that are intended as "beauty shots" or "artistic", never in my documentary series.

    In general, I try to create a good composition at the location, carefully positioning the elements of the frame and choosing my own vantage point and focal length to create the best visual tension without overlaps, and avoiding (or hiding) distractions.
    This does not mean that I stage my shots. Obviously this one was posed, but 99% of my images are just snaps of the dynamic situation before me, so that process of positioning and compositioning happens instinctively and super fast.

    Now to get back to this particular case and your effort and result :

    1) Your effort is valiant, but an attentive viewer can still see that the image is manipulated.
    That my wife's legs are straight while the little columns behind her are distorted, is a clear give-away.
    Being closer to the camera and the edge of the frame should have resulted in bent legs.
    That is, BTW, also the reason why I could not ask her to just move closer.
    Getting her as close to the center (thus higher in the frame without overlapping the important center balcony behind her) was paramount.

    2) I thought it was actually a benefit for the image that she was balancing on that precariously slim metal bar.
    It adds fun to the image and the pose, and tells you that my wife is willing to jump through a few hoops for me (sometimes).

    And that is why I value your input in showing me the selective brightening of the image. I might do that in the future.
    And I value also you showing me to take it a step further, but I don't see myself doing that in the future.

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    June 28, 2024, 9:03 a.m.

    It is not really my personal cup of tea (taking as criterium: would I hang this on a wall for me to look at it more often).
    But I do appreciate every expression of creativity and the willingness to share it.
    Much like with LouHolland actually (a former contributor whose PP experiments went often in the same kind of direction).

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    June 28, 2024, 9:03 a.m.

    No problem Roel 😊

    I don't normally move elements about in a scene unless it's necessary for some reason. But given that "she who must be obeyed" likes to be "featured" in any photos I take of her I thought I would try with your image as well

    It needs a bit of tidying up to be a final image that looks totally realistic but this was just meant to be a quick proof of concept without necessarily being perfect.

    Anyway, you have some food for thought for the future now 😊

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    June 28, 2024, 9:06 a.m.

    We are on the same page.

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    June 28, 2024, 9:08 a.m.

    This view through one architectural experiment and onto the next (a bit less adventurous) reminded me of a couple of structures visited in recent years:
    The Centre Pompidou in Metz
    The Setas in Sevilla.
    It is where art and architecture meet (and ideally, go hand in hand instead of fist to fist).

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    June 28, 2024, 9:13 a.m.

    This image reminds me so much of certain scenes in Scotland, that I am already aching to go back there
    (although changes are slim our little hiking group will - after five tours we have covered most of the territory; some want to move our playing field to the Dolomites or the Pyrenees or to Balkan Mountains... We'll just have to keep Scotland on the backburner for trips with the grandchildren - when we have them...)

    The shapes and curves and swirlings in your dramatic sky are in perfect harmony with the landscape on the foreground.
    The majestic mountains (part sunlit, part in shadow and precisely that creates more drama) sit between, like delicious Toblerone.

    I do like the very bold PP, because of the medium we are looking at. A small image on a computer screen.
    It would probably be a tad too much for a very big print on a wall.

    (And now of course you have us wondering what that distraction was. I have not taken out my magnifying glass to try and figure out WHERE it was, let alone WHAT.)

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    June 28, 2024, 9:15 a.m.

    I appreciate the series, and especially the fact that you showed us two different takes on the same spot, with different shutter speeds.
    Interesting comparison.

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    June 28, 2024, 9:20 a.m.

    At one point in my photographic "career" (haha on that) I was working on a project called 50/50.
    It was a series of images shot in real life and without content manipulation, but that looked like composites of two very distinct photos.
    The images were all split exactly down the middle (horizontally or vertically) and the idea was that both halves would work well as individual photos, but with a huge juxtaposition through the combination.

    This image of yours could have fit right in, for exactly the reasons stated in your title: the colour temperature difference is remarkable.

    I only think I would have tried to stand further back from the concrete pillar, in order to have it slimmer in the frame.
    But I am guessing that was not physically possible, or maybe you would have ended up with unwelcome distractions on the edges of the frame.

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    June 28, 2024, 9:26 a.m.

    When shooting interesting buildings in crowded city situations, I often shoot the buildings not from ground level up, but starting a bit higher.
    It helps be get rid of pedestrians, cars, garish shop windows, traffic signs, garbage bins and other eye-sores.
    I have the feeling that you have employed a similar strategy here, but in a rather extreme way.
    We only see the roof, and then not even the whole roof.
    It leaves me with a feeling of wanting to see more.
    Do you have any other images of the same building (maybe in portrait orientation)?
    That lonely branch of palm tree fills a bit of empty space, but not quite enough for my taste. Being that small and on the border, makes it feel less like a deliberate inclusion than like something that was hard to avoid. *(I do understand of course that you wanted to stand straight in front of the building.) *

  • June 28, 2024, 12:49 p.m.

    Personally, I am quite happy with Roel’s oríginal. Moving his wife off the railings, while a “clever” trick, destroys the great sense of humour of the original. It never occurred to me that the original was a fake, either.

    David

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    June 28, 2024, 1:30 p.m.

    SUPERB FAIRY WREN


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    Canon 90D f/6.3, 1/2000s, ISO 250, 552mm (883mm eq)

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    June 28, 2024, 1:58 p.m.

    Your comment about the little columns got me thinking about how to make it more realistic. I know you would never do this but I couldn't resist the temptation to have a bit more play with this one.

    To a trained eye experienced with fish-eye lenses the manipulation probably would still be detected but to anyone else it might get through notwithstanding the rushed imperfect selection of your wife.

    Anyway I'll let this one go now and thank you for letting us "play" with a very interesting image.

    I straightened the little columns.


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    June 28, 2024, 2:13 p.m.

    Roel,

    There are times one has to take what one gets. I couldn't get much else.

    But I like the way I was able to line things up for the upper part of the building with the geometry that results in this shot. Getting more of the building in the frame was not possible for a number of reasons and realize it may seem incomplete. But that's the image! 😉

    It's a landmark here, and those who know the structure would kind of "get" the composition, (I think!).

    I actually liked that the palm intruded just a bit, just a "skosh," but understand that others might feel it needs to be more present.

    Thanks for the comments!

    Rich

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    June 28, 2024, 4:27 p.m.

    That shot just hurts my eyes.

    An image has good separation blur where the background is (mostly) indistinguishable and minimal separation blur where the background is distinguishable with minimal blur. There is generally no happy medium - certainly not in this case.
    I can't be sure on sharpening but the bird's head feathers look like they have had hot wax combed through them - a common result of over sharpening.

    Edited for clarity.

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    June 28, 2024, 9:15 p.m.

    The Man and The Machine

    One of the highlights of Darjeeling, India, is the Darjeeling Himalayan Railway, which is affectionately, but also slightly disrespectfully, known as the Toy Train. It serves the dual purpose of a tourist attraction and a valuable transport link down to the lowlands, the airport and the main Indian Railway system. Most of the timetabled services are now carried out by the six diesel locomotives, but there are still at least twice that number of steam locomotives, many of which date back to the 1880s, whilst their younger siblings are from the 1920s!
    Every morning, they are fired and steamed and brought to life with a mixture of love, care, skill and persuasion with heavy blunt objects. It is gloriously labour-intensive and a symbiosis of man and machine.

    Pete

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    June 28, 2024, 10:21 p.m.
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    June 28, 2024, 10:38 p.m.

    Nope, I don't like it but that's me and the way I look at photos compared to the way I look at painting. In a couple of previous posts Dan has altered the original to bring up warm areas. OK. The warming was consistent. Here it isn't only warming. There are patches of different colours that to me appear that look randomly applied. The feathering at the edge of the patches is jarringly sudden. I know Dan wasn't intending the shot to look realistic but to me , it's too close. Either the image maker goes for it with whatever non realistic techniques they want to apply, or they need to be more subtle.
    PS. Some of my favourite wines over the years have come from that valley.

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    June 28, 2024, 10:54 p.m.

    This image from Chris appeals to me hugely. From early school years age I was entranced by the miracles of triangulation. Its ability to create strong structures from lightweight materials seemed like magic. It still awes me. The photo is a homage to the principle. Frame structures and triangulation are everywhere in the shot. We look through a lattice work and see cranes using the principle to support ridiculous loads on such flimsy beams. We see what they can do with those cranes.
    When I get around to setting up my construction company, I'll buy this photo to put on the entrance foyer wall.