• Members 676 posts
    Aug. 13, 2023, 2:55 p.m.

    [quote="@MikeFewster"]
    This is miserable.
    In the Lecce region of Italy, the olive trees are dieing. Magnificent old specimens are being chopped down and burnt to try to stop the disease spreading. Unfortunately, the disease continues to advance. I decided I had to do this as a series.
    The first shot is an ancient olive as it should look. I took this shot ten years ago in Sicily.
    ......

    [/quote

    I like this set as an editorial commentary with the narrative .. not sure I'd like any one as a stand alone ... sorry about that! ....]

    WhyNot

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    Aug. 13, 2023, 2:59 p.m.

    I confess this picture took me a bit of time to appreciate... Looking at it in the largest size on this site it appears to be more of a painting than a photograph and I like that effect and would want this printed very large ... A few niggles... at that scale there are few fixes that might be needed at the pixel level (ie a small scratch to the right .. ( ... makes me think this was scanned from film!) .. at the photograph size I had a problem with that shadow around the center ceramic pot -- I saw it a dog, or other animal, lying there .. not so much enlarged ... I had to spend a bit of time with this picture but I like it when viewed very large! ....

    WhyNot

    I just read your commentary! .... I find that sharing here on the Internet that I sharpen a bit more than I would normally but it seems detail is valued higher than composition by many here ... or ,maybe I"m just getting old and ... well .....

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    Aug. 13, 2023, 3:01 p.m.

    I think it is the door that makes this most interesting for me as the graffiti image seems to be expecting someone to step out! ...
    WhyNot

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    Aug. 13, 2023, 5:55 p.m.

    Mike, you've addressed issues I often have: what story, exactly, am I trying to tell? In this case, I was not expecting the birds to be there. My intention was to make studies of forms, shadows and light. In culling and editing, I was attracted to some of those features but I couldn't ignore the birds 😅 I really should have chosen and edited two separate sets - so that I'd have strengths of whichever, instead of a mishmash. Many thanks!

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    Aug. 13, 2023, 7:47 p.m.

    Thanks, and I can honestly say that processing is as much fun for me as taking photos. The deeper in the weeds I get with editing tools, the more fun I have. I don't really worry about whether the end result is a photo or an art piece or just a crazy bit of fun.

    Glad to know that about the name for the curtains. My husband, who has Dutch heritage, is pleased to know we have Dutch curtains in the kitchen! Glad you like the processing.

    Thanks, Linda. I am glad the photos of the old house have acquired some sort of conjoined message. My memories are part of why I find so much pleasure in being there. I spent a fair portion of the first two decades of my life there. Our lives were simple but somewhat charmed, and I try to capture that when I can.

    I have "done up" a couple of artistic images from photos I've taken there and printed them on canvas and hung them in the rooms that are pictured. I may do this one as well. My grandson especially likes the one in the living room, which shows the print of the living room, which shows the print of the living room....

    That was just what I was hoping someone would take note of, the visible wind I was trying to capture! Thanks!

    Thank you Chris. When I'm in the house, I am living in both past and present. I think you described that quite well in your comments.

    Thanks for the detailed feedback Mike, It will help me get this one ready for a print, which I have about decided to do. The dark thing you see along the right edge of the counter is not a shadow but my black iron frying pan. I see how it could be taken for an errant shadow. I will add back a little detail so it's more recognizable. Adding brush strokes by hand takes a little more time but it keeps software under my control rather than its own. I use a wacom tablet and an art pen, and a variety of mixer and regular brushes.

    Thank you Why Not for your time and comments, and I appreciate your taking a long hard look at it. I'll take a look at that scratch (probably an artifact from the texture). I know what you mean about the shadow of the little sugar bowl which is mixed up with the shadows of the flowers and vase. I have not tried to alter it from how it was in the photo but I may need to. I'll try some "things". It will be printed on canvas which is very forgiving, so if I blunder it may still be OK.
    Yes, I agree there is a high standard of sharpness among most photography folk, but I just don't buy into it and since I'm not trying to impress anybody but myself I'll stick to my own preferences. I fell in love with the Orton effect when it was done only in the darkroom, and use it on lots of my images, usually on just one layer that's blended with layers with other effects. I seldom sharpen a photo unless it is somewhat "troubled" and OOF, then I'll try Topaz sharpen on it. But then I'll soften it again!

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    Aug. 13, 2023, 10:03 p.m.

    Hi Minniev. Like WhyNot, I was talking about the sugar bowl shadow, not the pan at the back. The sugar bowl shadow seems too dark, too large. The bowl gets mixed up with the shadow and I agree with Why not that it becomes animal like. Figuering it out intrudes into the photo. The shape of this quite dark area doesn't seem to match the areas that create the shadow. Can the shadow be lightened to a density closer to that from the curtains?
    I hadn't noticed the pan at the back. Perhaps lighten the shadow area in it a touch but it is the shadow in front of the sugar bowl.
    I read Lou's comment on the lace. He's totally right and the lace is wonderful.

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    Aug. 13, 2023, 10:19 p.m.

    Got it! I will work on the shadow. It's that way in the original too - I'm pretty sure I can mitigate it with brushwork. ( Animal shape? -Maybe it is the ghost of my cat. thanks to you and WhyNot for spotting her. )

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    Aug. 14, 2023, 2:53 a.m.

    That's OK. Shot 1 was taken years ago and was meant to stand alone. The rest of the shots were from a speeding train window. We saw km after km of dead trees and I found it quite distressing. I started photographing then and then asked questions afterwards about what was happening. I didn't get to walk around in any of the diseased areas. The photos were meant to meant to be looked at as a series, not because of the intrinsic photographic value of any one image. Each shot was selected for a particular reason. The photo I really wanted would have shown acres of dead trees. I couldn't get one that conveyed the scale of the destruction.

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    Aug. 14, 2023, 7:48 a.m.

    No, that's fine. I'll show both to my wife. She is particularly fascinated by the lines of foam as breaking waves run up on the beach. She has a necklace based on that idea.

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    Aug. 15, 2023, 10:09 a.m.

    Not much time to comment this week...

    Apart from the soft blanket of cloud over the valley, I like the pillars of cloud rising beyond the far mountain in this one.

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    Aug. 15, 2023, 10:19 a.m.

    This is the sort of graffiti I like. Sharp, clear, lots of bright colours and a perky subject, who is maybe dreaming of the artist who goes by the handle Toska11, or who maybe lives there with an ironic "No Graffiti sign???

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    Aug. 15, 2023, 10:27 a.m.

    I hear you (from your later reply) with this sort of scenery. Where to compose, where to crop? But the BiF and their shadows make this one showing a newer face where some rock has broken away.

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    Aug. 15, 2023, 10:44 a.m.

    There is so much to explore in this nicely softened work of art, that I couldn't quibble about any hard to place shadows. The pretty curtains in the breeze. The flowers in the glass vase. The orange coloured jar to the right. Is that a Hindu figurine hiding behind? The little ceramic piglets and more... I haven't thought about printing any of my photos yet but that one would be nice in a frame hanging on an appropriate wall...

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    Aug. 15, 2023, 10:51 a.m.

    Serenity it is. Beautiful capture of many different shades of green. I like a little bit of sky to add some colour contrast and the little tortoise? fountain is part of the garden so I don't mind it even if the stone around it is a touch bland.

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    Aug. 15, 2023, 11:12 a.m.

    It's funny because after reading Linda's post I started to crop it but same as you it wasn't working so I thought it's a clone job if I ever get the time. But you have saved me and of course I don't mind. I glanced at it before I read your comments and wondered was there a small branch in there, but it's a sneaky addition 😉
    Yes we could never guess, but it is appreciated, thank you.

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    Aug. 15, 2023, 12:01 p.m.

    Thank you very much, Bryan.

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    Aug. 15, 2023, 12:24 p.m.

    Walpole tidal pool long exposure (Margate, Kent, UK)

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