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    June 24, 2023, 7:22 p.m.

    When trying to get an unusual photo of the Eiffel Tower, the very fact that it is not the dominant feature is well down the road to success!

    The first photo sees a nicely composed army of vertical features, ranging from the obelisk and Eiffel Tower to the array of relatively small lamps. There is even a theme of gold trimmings to link them as well, which adds some welcome warmth to the scene. Their ages range from the ancient obelisk through the ornate lamps to the relatively modern tower, but in each case their function was primarily to impress.

    In the second, the vertical theme is still there, but reduced, and the addition of the female statue adds a nice twist. She has her back to us, but appears to be looking at the verticals, which dare to dwarf her, and we see the tip of her sword by her left shoulder indicating she may be willing to do something about it. It is interesting how her inclusion invites stories and interpretations, which the first photo does not. Or maybe that is just me.

    At first sight the photos are similar, but actually I enjoyed them both for different reasons.

    Pete

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    June 24, 2023, 7:53 p.m.

    When I looked at this at large size the yellow on the ocean became far more visible. It's the unusualness of that colour on the ocean that is the point of the image. The inclusion of a bit more yellow, courtesy of the bollard, is clever. It gives another yellow along another horizontal line and adds a satisfying pattern to the whole.

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    June 24, 2023, 7:59 p.m.

    This is another little gem or Master-Peas. The close-up peas floating in a spoon on a green sea of pea-shaped bokeh balls is very engaging, with the pink “pea” providing the visual hook.
    I tried to work out how it was done. With a lens throwing the foreground into bokeh balls and the background creamy, with a sharp slice through the pea and spoon. Also the lighting, where the reflection in the spoon is so bright. Or is it a composite. In any case it was fun to ponder and, whatever method was used, really doesn’t matter and it results in this great success.

    Pete

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    June 24, 2023, 8:06 p.m.

    Thanks Mike, I was about to type my response, when I noticed you had already made the points I wanted to make.

    I would just like to add, I enjoyed the Canadian Brown snake slithering out from its hiding place and heading towards the bollard!

    Pete

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    June 24, 2023, 8:12 p.m.

    That's a song I have liked since the 1960s. I was certain that Pete Seeger wrote it. I checked. I was wrong.
    The image has been constructed from one or more photos so I looked for a reason for the treatment. The association with "Little Boxes" is perfect.'Each house looks to be of superior quality. They are repeated. They overlap. They don't look as though they are about comfortable living. In Australia we have a derogatory term for housing like this. "MacMansions." These are houses where the owner/builder tries to get every bit of houses they can onto the block with the absolute minimum of green space left. These are compared, with nostalgia, to Australian housing until around 1970. In those days most houses were built on a 1/4 acre block and had backyards big enough for cricket and football games. Linda's photo would be interpreted with plenty of political clout in this country and I see it in those terms.

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    June 24, 2023, 8:30 p.m.

    I enjoy studying this collage of houses and find it an inventive concept. Using the negative images makes it more surreal and seems to make it look more like an ink drawing.
    I am not sure about the mirror image. On the one hand it fits well with the idea of everything being the same, as mentioned in the song, but somehow the relative chaos on one side, then a relatively quiet patch in the middle, then the mirror image, breaks it up a bit. What it does do is allow the subconscious to find multiple faces, which rely heavily on symmetry to be identified as such. It is best seen in the thumbnail, and looking at different sized thumbnails reveals a number of different animal cartoons looking out at us.

    Pete

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    June 24, 2023, 8:53 p.m.

    The multiple images have given the graffiti a three dimensional and tactile feel, which I really like and is a good example of an image being created by the processing rather than simply improved or modified.
    However, I do like the suggestion of masking out a portion, or portions, of one or some of the layers in the image, leaving the edges as they are. This would give a focus on part(s) of the image.

    Pete

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    June 24, 2023, 9:02 p.m.

    I like Andrew’s panoramic version with the increased brightness and detail in the water.
    In any case the rather delicate and amusing stance of the birds emphasises their fragility against the dark chunk of concrete (which balances the birds visually quite nicely) and the raging water.
    The Dam Birds provide a very fulfilling project, and I am glad to hear you enjoy it for its own sake, and not just for its potential to provide a good photo. It is so important, because if a good photo is the sole purpose of time spent, then photography can quickly become a very annoying hobby.

    Pete

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    June 24, 2023, 9:23 p.m.

    These two photos of birds and their offspring could hardly be more different.
    The first is really about the beautiful plumage of the goose, which is impressive. The fact that a gosling is also in the frame is almost irrelevant, as the photo shows no obvious maternal connection between the two. The lighting is bright, but harsh, the pose stiff and upright and the sharpness includes both birds and lots of grass, resulting in a very factual image, but lacking in emotion.

    Now, the second, wow! It is B&W as the first obvious difference, but the curves and sweeps of the composition suggest caresses and the cygnet snuggles against the mother’s body. These visual clues mean the viewer feels the maternal bond, even though the swan is actually preoccupied with herself and is ignoring the cygnet at the moment the photo was taken. The choice of a high key finish and the beautifully sharp centre fading to a white vignette adds to that feeling. It is an excellent image.

    Pete

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    June 24, 2023, 9:34 p.m.

    I'm so glad the photo spoke to you, Mike! Fascinating to read about your country's use of "McMansion" because I first remember the term in the US in the late 1980's with new housing developments near Washington, DC. A google search just now pulled up this from 2022:

    A McMansion is a pejorative term for a certain type of ubiquitous supersized suburban American home that people love to hate. A symbol of American excess, these homes reinforce the unsustainable notion that bigger is always better and can be found cluttering neighborhoods across the U.S. from sea to shining sea and beyond.

    Thanks!

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    June 24, 2023, 9:40 p.m.

    Thanks so much for your intriguing and educational response!

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    June 24, 2023, 9:49 p.m.

    Time travel to the beginnings of the American interstate system and family vacations in wood-bodied station wagons, with Mom holding the map and us kids counting cows from the back seat while whining "Are we there yet?"

    😁

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    June 25, 2023, 12:39 p.m.

    Agree. However, I don't think it works as well as last week's from Jim. This is an image where opinions will be personal. There is much to explore here and the fun comes from digging in to find the details. The overall colours and complexity appeals (the colour combination pushes the same buttons as does SimpleJoys photo this week). I preferred last week's from Jim where I found an overall composition and a point of focus.

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    June 25, 2023, 12:42 p.m.

    I'm rethink this a bit. Looking more, I become aware that Jim has used a different technique with finer detail around the borders and this takes the eye into the central area which has larger shapes as well as a little more white. I still prefer the previous week's shot because I found more I could identify with as a subject.

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    June 25, 2023, 12:47 p.m.

    Minniev, this isn't fair. I run out of adjectives with regard to your Dam Birds. Over and over I find myself saying much the same thing.
    Just ditto my previous remarks and add a note for the extraordinary legs in this shot. So long, fine and sharp and with an apparent fragility that mocks the waves. So perfectly places against a background that shows those qualities off.

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    June 25, 2023, 12:59 p.m.

    Somewhere I have read that Australia has one of, possibly the most, diverse bird populations on the planet. It is to be hoped that we will do much better in the future in looking after them.
    Even by lorikeet standards, I think the colors of the bird as well as the sky are oversaturated here. I'm in two minds about the formatting. It might depend on where the image is shown. As seen here, I think the landscape shape is a bit too extended. Besides, the banksia is very photogenic in its own right and the colours work well with the lorikeet. The angle of the banksia is balanced by the tail so I think you could change the height a little to include more of the banksia.
    More Australia birds please.

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    June 25, 2023, 1:50 p.m.

    Is this a photo of an empty garage? No, of course not, because although that maybe true objectively, it is really about the colour and the graphical composition, and they are good enough to make this an enjoyable photo. Simple, minimalistic and good.

    Pete

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    June 25, 2023, 2 p.m.

    A well-spotted juxtaposition between the tangled hair of the visitor and Venus. There is a strong diagonal link between the visitor’s head and , through Venus’s body, to her head, which ensures we get the connection. It looks as if the two are comparing notes. How boring this photo could have been, if it had just been a photo of Botticelli’s Venus, fantastic though the painting is.

    Pete